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Thursday, August 9, 2018


 The Beach 

When the blue waves are massive dead fish get washed up onto the beach.The smell so dreadful like rotten eggs.You can see the insides of the skeleton . Makes me want to vomit. I see seagulls flying everywhere over the beach to find little fish. People fishing on the pair. Dogs playing in the freezing cold water and digging holes in the sand. And great waves for people to surf on.I taste salty air from the water form the great big blue waves.



















1 comment:

  1. This is amazing because you showed not told
    Did you know I like the beach
    Next time, you could add more writing
    Why did you put a giant spot at the end with nothing?

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